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I see your scattered pieces lying on the floor
I rearrange them into a mosaic
and your scars are beautiful

I wonder how fragile our minds and souls are
I try to look past the simply prosaic
and your scars are beautiful
Metaphors. I can't get enough of them.
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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:)
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Precipitous120 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
What the hell are you on about... seriously 
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goldshroom Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student Writer
I'm doing a thing.
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Precipitous120 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Like a shattered soul, my love lies broken
Blood runs down my finger tips
I put the pieces back together again
He is still beautiful, fragmented but wonderful

Now don't that make more sense... it's hard to see what you are on about
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goldshroom Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
I didn't leave much for interpretation to begin with. It's hard to see what you're on about.
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Phaneres Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Really nice one.
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Bluewither132 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
This is mindblowingly awesome. 
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IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are so genius!!
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Akai-karasu Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this really is beautiful, it actually feels fragile when reading it.
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der-steppen-wolf Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
I really like this!!
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