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I believe in miracles
and the unexplained

We define in parables
what has not been named

I haven't asked
if you disagree,
but I'm not one tasked
by the enemy

I support all womens' health,
not just physical

Social, emotional self
and the spiritual

I haven't asked
if you disagree-
don't feel attacked
by the enemy

I expect those who would lead
to show honesty

Compromise is what we need,
grounded in reality

I haven't asked
if you disagree,
but I'm not one backed
by the enemy

I hold that love isn't made
but can be given

It's not about "getting laid"
or who's sex-driven

I haven't asked
if you disagree-
don't believe I'm masked
by the enemy

Between you and me
there is no doubting
the world we see,
so I'm not asking

Cherish all that you concieve
and I'll let it be
because I'll always believe
you are not the enemy

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SpiderMilkshake Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
I love this... The rhythm is perfect, but aside from that it just tugs mah feels. :thanks: I totally understand this feeling, like you can't even just say what you think anymore without someone's hackles going up for so little reason... so much defensiveness.

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goldshroom Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student Writer
I know, right? It's like people can't even communicate properly anymore...
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living-the-story Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! I love the message of this poem :heart: Simply beautiful!
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goldshroom Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Writer
This one is in direct response to a flame war I observed once. I got to thinking "stating opinions is a surefire way to be personally attacked, huh?"

So I wrote a poem stating opinions in a way that, when attacked, would make the attacker look like he/she is completely missing the point.
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living-the-story Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well you did a wonderful job, really nice stuff. I could completely understand what you were saying.
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
great and powerful poem. i can feel the emotion from this one allot.
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goldshroom Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Writer
Oh yes. I gave myself chills when writing this, and that's a rarity.
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
well its great. ^^
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